I don't know how 'more delicate' could even be possible ... but I'll take your word for it. I just might need a little help looking for where that line goes.
[he takes a quick shower, changes his shirt, and takes himself for a walk through Bavan instead of using the Arcade key to cheat. it's nice getting to know the streets, to slowly integrate himself into them the way he'd known New York. as he mounts the stairs to Tawna's apartment, he looks around a bit apprehensively: this is Quentin's territory after all, and he doesn't want him to see him and feel threatened. therefore, when he knocks, he keeps his voice down]
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[he takes a quick shower, changes his shirt, and takes himself for a walk through Bavan instead of using the Arcade key to cheat. it's nice getting to know the streets, to slowly integrate himself into them the way he'd known New York. as he mounts the stairs to Tawna's apartment, he looks around a bit apprehensively: this is Quentin's territory after all, and he doesn't want him to see him and feel threatened. therefore, when he knocks, he keeps his voice down]
Tawna?